Tell: Cade was shocked
Show: As Cades Jaw dropped to his chin he screams like a T.V on 100% volume. His eyes widened and he looks like he saw something very terrifying like watching a scary movie.
Tell: Jimmy was Excited to see his dad.
Show: Jimmy was jumping with joy as he saw his dad coming into the house his teeth were shining like light bouncing of gold. Jimmy's face was filled with happiness and joy.
Tell: James was sad.
Show: James was sad his eyes drooped and a river was made down his face to his chin.
Tell: Mansour was happy.
Show: Mansour was happy because he won a game of soccer and he got a new puppy and he got to go to Rainbow's end.
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